In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are an increasing number of people who are physically ill due to massive fast food intakes in some countries. As a result of such an issue, imposing of tax on such junk food seems to be the only option. Even though the taxation can be effective at a short term, in my opinion, this would not be effective for the long run because people’s eating habit would not be changed and the craving for junk food would not stop immediately.
Eating too much junk food will increase various health issues related to unhealthy foods. Majority of junk food have been reported and announced for its malnutrition value and richness in fat, carbohydrates and sugar. All those substances including chemical materials would cause fatal diseases including diabetes, heart diseases, insulin resistant and cancers. Therefore, high consumption of unhealthy foods can have severe damages.
Imposing of taxation on junk food can reduce the number of intake. Usually people take junk food for cheaper price, so by increasing the price by taxation can restrict the consumption. When the government imposes of taxation on junk food, the overall price of junk food will increase. In other words, the price of junk food after the tax will be similar to other restaurant’s meals (healthy meals). This will increase people’s eating habit of seeking of healthy food instead. Hence, the taxation can change the people’s habit and this will reduce the unhealthy food consumption rates.
In my opinion, the taxation on junk food is unrealistic, because there are many reasons for people to eat junk food and price is just one of those reasons. The higher price in junk food may reduce the people’s consumption but it is limited to a short term. Eventually people will crave for junk food because they have been addicted to stimulus tastes. In compared to other restaurant’s meals, junk foods are available 24/7 and it is fast so it is preferable choice for a number of people.
In conclusion, even though fast food has the advantage of convenient and cheap prices, the individual’s health can have a fatal consequence. The governmental proposal of imposing tax is unrealistic and unreasonable to achieve since the cheap price is only one of many other reasons for people to intake junk foods. Therefore, I agree with the restriction on junk foods but not completely agree with the taxation methods are the only way to prevent such consumption.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in my opinion', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.307036247335 0.247107183377 124% => OK
Verbs: 0.125799573561 0.155533422707 81% => OK
Adjectives: 0.100213219616 0.0946595960268 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0383795309168 0.0501214627716 77% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0170575692964 0.0437548338989 39% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113006396588 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0383795309168 0.0403226058552 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88604096093 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0234541577825 0.0326793684256 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0788912579957 0.0861772015684 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0362473347548 0.021408717616 169% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00426439232409 0.011925033212 36% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2452.0 1933.35771543 127% => OK
No of words: 404.0 316.048096192 128% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06930693069 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20517956788 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.34900990099 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.262376237624 0.28420135186 92% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.190594059406 0.203846283523 93% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121287128713 0.137316102897 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88604096093 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.44801980198 0.56093040696 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.7955430823 60.7387585426 79% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0891783567 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2743713208 49.517814964 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.6 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 20.7743622355 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.45 0.814263465372 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 46.4376237624 49.1944974215 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.52941176471 1.69124875643 150% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349568563531 0.332605444948 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.131996020306 0.102741220458 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0749076294226 0.0668466124924 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.562682227298 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111210490887 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159256896716 0.134430193775 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846487053149 0.0742795772207 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.321979557648 0.324371583561 99% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.135336301338 0.0638462369009 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240715012999 0.228012699653 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536086093236 0.058150111329 92% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 11.0 2.5751503006 427% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 10.4468937876 191% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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