In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Junk foods have been increasingly popular as well as a threat for youngsters. Having too much of fast food has resulted in many health problems hence necessary measures to cut consumption of junk food has to be made. This essay will argue why Junk food is not good for health and necessary steps that can be taken to lower consumption of junk foods.
Fast foods have immensely grown in many areas and are unhygienic for those who consume it on a regular basis. A vast number of chemicals are involved while preparing these foods and increases the chances of deadly diseases. They are prepared in the high flame which also results in overcooking. Overconsumption of fast foods can cause many health problems like diabetes, hypertension etc. A recent survey states that around 70 percent of teenagers are obese and are prone to diabetes due to unhealthy eating habits. Hence, the chances of life-threatening diseases are more due to the consumption of fast food.
On the other hand, the government should create awareness and make necessary measures to lessen the practice of eating unhealthy foods. Imposing taxes on restaurants and shops that serve fast food can bring down the chances of consuming junk food. For example, the implementation of GST on junk foods has shown a decline in the number of people who take fast food in India. Avoiding fast foods can also help the environment in reducing the number of plastics used in packing that result in polluting the environment. Therefore, governments should take the necessary steps to make sure control over unhealthy food which would help the environment.
This essay argued why the government should get involved in public health concerns and avoiding fast food would help for healthy living. In my opinion, consumption of fast food is not a good practice and a healthy lifestyle can be maintained by reducing its consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...e obese due to unhealthy eating habits. Hence the chances of life-threatening disease...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1412.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13454545455 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12705284639 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.4738209846 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.1333333333 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328339428296 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117370988921 0.084324248473 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678470099331 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204133622704 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392243236884 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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