In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Many countries have problems with the number of the citizen decreasing their health because of fast foods, also a plan to impose a higher tax on these food is developed by the official politician. Furthermore, some people admit this idea to prevent consumer eat fast food regularly when they know the tax higher than before and the final price is more expensive than non-fast food, but the efficiency time of consume these food is irreplaceable. My Essay will compare the drawbacks and benefit on this new suggestion.
A serious health problems are caused by the bad habit to consume fast food regularly, also can evoke high cholesterol and high blood pleasure which the world's biggest killer. Trans fats are filled in the fried food which are known to increase cholesterol level in human body, and these bad food contain heavy-sodium which can aggregate existing heart disorder, including congestive heart failure. This unhealthy habit was examined by some researchers in Columbia university, and they found that In 2019, 80% American who eat fast foods have more shortest age at least 15 years earlier than Japanese who dislike fast food and love to consume fresh food. The alternative idea to rise the tax of this food is believed can make the citizen think twice before they consume these unhealthy food because of the price become more expensive than others foods.
Commonly, the workers only have few minutes to consume their regular meal, also the energy of the citizens are need to recharge quickly by them with some proteins and fats. Fast foods are alternative meal that can consume by the citizens with few good neutrinos, also the price of these quick meal is the reason why people intend to eat these meals. The Indonesian University researchers found that almost 87% Indonesian's workers only have approximately 15 minutes to eat their lunch. some citizens doesn't agree with this idea because they have limited time to consume their food, If the government implement this ideas, they will produce more efforts and money.
The solutions of this problems are how the government's policy can make the citizens consume less unhealthy meal, also these official stakeholder can provide not only more healthy food but also meal which have a quick served.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 146, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
..., also a plan to impose a higher tax on these food is developed by the official politician...
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Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...ood, but the efficiency time of consume these food is irreplaceable. My Essay will compare...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'worlds the biggest'.
Suggestion: worlds the biggest
...terol and high blood pleasure which the worlds biggest killer. Trans fats are filled in the fr...
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Line 3, column 542, Rule ID: MOST_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use only 'shortest' (without 'more') when you use the superlative.
Suggestion: shortest
...9, 80% American who eat fast foods have more shortest age at least 15 years earlier than Japa...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'more the shortest'.
Suggestion: more the shortest
...9, 80% American who eat fast foods have more shortest age at least 15 years earlier than Japa...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...their food, If the government implement this ideas, they will produce more efforts a...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...e efforts and money. The solutions of this problems are how the governments policy...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
... solutions of this problems are how the governments policy can make the citizens consume le...
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Message: Did you mean 'this official' or 'these officials'?
Suggestion: this official; these officials
...izens consume less unhealthy meal, also these official stakeholder can provide not only more h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05066666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45973946226 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490666666667 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 595.8 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.2449623162 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.833333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.25 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242265682939 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102767214851 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690377509445 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165601032913 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865428191757 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.0 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.