In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In recent century there are an increasing number of people who are experiencing severe health related illness from excessive junk food consumption. To forbid these horrifying conditions, the government is approaching some essential steps and one of those is enforcing of taxes on fast foods. While I understand the effect of taxes can reduce the junk food consumptions in some extent, I believe that this will not be effective in a long run because the nation cannot fully control people’s preferences.
Enhancement of taxation on convenient foods can reduce some of consumption rates. The higher price can be burden for people and that leads to reconsidering of their unhealthy eating habits. People are generally craving for stimulus tastes which can be satisfied by eating unhealthy foods such as fast foods or junk foods, and this had been influenced by several ways. For example, TV commercials or peer groups’ influences can affect people’s eating habits regardless health effects on fast food taking.
The effectiveness of taxation is a questionable issue. If people are addicted to stimulus tastes and influenced by various forms of external factors, the price of foods may not be the biggest obstacles. In a short run, people will stop eating unhealthy foods because of the sudden price shock but eventually their eating habit will back to normal. The main reason for this is people have difficulties in changing their habits especially their habitual cycles. Therefore, imposing higher tax on convenient foods is not effective.
In conclusion, in some part of globe, people are becoming more habituated with convenience food despite realizing of fatal health consequences, obesity and other unhealthy related diseases. Taxation on junk food can have some effects but it is only for a short term and thus, this will only increase the corporation’s profits.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.286135693215 0.247107183377 116% => OK
Verbs: 0.150442477876 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103244837758 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0412979351032 0.0501214627716 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0206489675516 0.0437548338989 47% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12389380531 0.122226691241 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0589970501475 0.0403226058552 146% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98807179252 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0117994100295 0.0326793684256 36% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0825958702065 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0353982300885 0.021408717616 165% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00589970501475 0.011925033212 49% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1889.0 1933.35771543 98% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 6.3389261745 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.412751677852 0.374742101984 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281879194631 0.28420135186 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211409395973 0.203846283523 104% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.161073825503 0.137316102897 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98807179252 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.037074148 94% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553691275168 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 57.7065019907 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.2857142857 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8824961618 49.517814964 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.928571429 127.492653851 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7743622355 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.714285714286 0.814263465372 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 49.4736337488 49.1944974215 101% => OK
Elegance: 2.20833333333 1.69124875643 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36984678402 0.332605444948 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0906325042356 0.102741220458 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0573603288153 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.520018231808 0.534860350844 97% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.108043179482 0.148594505496 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.151681276993 0.134430193775 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454446717415 0.0742795772207 61% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.291184404527 0.324371583561 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0503857704498 0.0638462369009 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254739916805 0.228012699653 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336566682282 0.058150111329 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.68436873747 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 5.90881763527 17% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 10.0 2.5751503006 388% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 10.4468937876 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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