The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology for outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The main purpose of nuclear weapons is maintaining of the whole world to be peaceful. In addition to this, the nuclear energy, which is used to make nuclear weapons, provides environmental friendly energies. Therefore, this natural resource appears to have more advantages than that of disadvantages. Even though the environmental friendly natural resources seems beneficial to society, the problem with the waste and the potential accidents will damage the environment significantly and which may not be able to recover for more than a few decades.
In terms of its benefits, nuclear weapons can be used as the peaceful countries. Since most of countries are holding of nuclear weapons, nowadays, we are free from the wars. In other words, due to the rapid development of nuclear weapons and its technology, the whole nations agreed with the nuclear usage and the war conditions. Due to all this restriction, the world is free from wars and as a result, we can live in a safe and comfortable countries.
Furthermore, nuclear energies are environmentally beneficial. These natural energies are derived from the nature, so that those natural resources do not release any toxic emissions like fossil gases. As a result, the environment would not be damaged from the use or extraction of nuclear sources. Therefore, the use of nuclear energies are beneficial for the environment.
Despite all these benefits of nuclear power, it cannot deny that the nuclear energy is the main source to make the nuclear weapon, which is the most powerful and deadliness weapon in the world. For example, Fukushima cases in Japan damaged whole Asian Pacific Ocean due to the leakage of nuclear energies by the earthquakes. Even this happens 20 years ago, its consequences are still remaining. Also, the wasting the left over nuclear energy can be a problem. Even though nuclear power does not release any emissions, it has the leftover wastes and which wastes must handle with caution. The wrong way to handle of this waste can damage the environment or it can create another pocket size of nuclear weapons. Therefore, the consequence of the use of nuclear energies is phenomenal and the damage to the environment is fatal more than it gives the healthy environment.
In conclusion, the nuclear weapons can be used for maintain of world peace and the natural friendly aspects are the main advantages of its use. Even though the benefits of those natural resources are environmentally friendly, which damage to the earth is deadliness. Also, the damage to the environment cannot recover for a long period of time. Therefore, its disadvantages are outweigh the advantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 87, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...e used as the peaceful countries. Since most of countries are holding of nuclear weapons, nowaday...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e environment cannot recover for a long period of time. Therefore, its disadvantages are outwe...
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Line 5, column 378, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'outweighed'.
Suggestion: outweighed
... time. Therefore, its disadvantages are outweigh the advantages.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'for example', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'as a result', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.227272727273 0.247107183377 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.117768595041 0.155533422707 76% => OK
Adjectives: 0.138429752066 0.0946595960268 146% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0495867768595 0.0501214627716 99% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0227272727273 0.0437548338989 52% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113636363636 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0185950413223 0.0403226058552 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.88594843082 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0289256198347 0.0326793684256 89% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.132231404959 0.0861772015684 153% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0247933884298 0.021408717616 116% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0103305785124 0.011925033212 87% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2652.0 1933.35771543 137% => OK
No of words: 432.0 316.048096192 137% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13888888889 6.12580529183 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55901411391 4.20517956788 108% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.37962962963 0.374742101984 101% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.31712962963 0.28420135186 112% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.19212962963 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.12962962963 0.137316102897 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88594843082 2.80594681477 103% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.037074148 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.56093040696 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 47.5163298402 60.7387585426 78% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0891783567 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7826086957 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.048681922 49.517814964 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.304347826 127.492653851 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7826086957 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.521739130435 0.814263465372 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 50.4955716586 49.1944974215 103% => OK
Elegance: 1.89130434783 1.69124875643 112% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.549638814816 0.332605444948 165% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129792352772 0.102741220458 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0825310829196 0.0668466124924 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.574180578026 0.534860350844 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.147593248881 0.148594505496 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.241087896923 0.134430193775 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11344064836 0.0742795772207 153% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.470036353272 0.324371583561 145% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.107570336428 0.0638462369009 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.402066216385 0.228012699653 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639498662962 0.058150111329 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.68436873747 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 5.90881763527 169% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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