Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some could think it would be benefits to do so for comfortable and the development relationship with co-workers. However, working in different organisation can enhance adaptability and flexibility skills. Therefore, I believe that the improvement of social skills especially future career aspects and flexibility would be more beneficial than that of feeling comfortable and building a business relationship.
On the one hand, working in the same organisation provides the feeling of comfortable, convenience and security. Always having the repetitive working cycles; same environments, same co-workers and same tasks or projects, provide the feeling of security and comfortable. Also, there are opportunities to build a business relationship with co-workers. Therefore, working within the companies for a long time bring a feeling of comfortable, convenience and security as well as building a business relationship with colleagues.
On the other hand, working in different organisations has several advantages. To start with, people have better opportunities for future careers. Usually working for the different company means working for the higher positions or there are more future opportunities to grow. Furthermore, people can get flexibility by working for different companies. For instance, Google has the flexible working schedules, whereas Ernst & Young is known for having strict working schedules. Therefore, by working in different companies enhance people's adaptation and flexibility.
In my opinion, I understand the comfortable feelings for working in a company bring a person with a security and there will be having more chances to build a relationship with a co-worker which develop to a business partner. Nevertheless, not everyone would be getting the opportunities to change the long time relationship into a business relationship. Therefore, the opportunities to learn about the future career and flexibility have more benefits than that of feeling comfortable.
In conclusion, there are both aspects for working in a company for a long time; the feeling of comfortable and convenience by working in the same company while future career opportunities and flexibility for working in different companies. These can be learnt by changing the organisations.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'whereas', 'while', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'as well as', 'in my opinion', 'to start with', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.265957446809 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.148936170213 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101063829787 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0345744680851 0.0501214627716 69% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0106382978723 0.0437548338989 24% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.130319148936 0.122226691241 107% => OK
Participles: 0.0691489361702 0.0403226058552 171% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.37100607989 2.80594681477 120% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0212765957447 0.0326793684256 65% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.103723404255 0.0861772015684 120% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.021408717616 99% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00265957446809 0.011925033212 22% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2280.0 1933.35771543 118% => OK
No of words: 337.0 316.048096192 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.76557863501 6.12580529183 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20517956788 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.46587537092 0.374742101984 124% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.394658753709 0.28420135186 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.275964391691 0.203846283523 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.213649851632 0.137316102897 156% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.37100607989 2.80594681477 120% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.427299703264 0.56093040696 76% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 42.6823080583 60.7387585426 70% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7222222222 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9761476725 49.517814964 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.666666667 127.492653851 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7743622355 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.888888888889 0.814263465372 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 58.1880975931 49.1944974215 118% => OK
Elegance: 2.39726027397 1.69124875643 142% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300572126454 0.332605444948 90% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.129925770663 0.102741220458 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0896569155717 0.0668466124924 134% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.559847510538 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.165020451809 0.148594505496 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127511874353 0.134430193775 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479918428201 0.0742795772207 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326514970639 0.324371583561 101% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0419485056628 0.0638462369009 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204757551347 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490525615046 0.058150111329 84% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.68436873747 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 5.90881763527 271% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 10.4468937876 163% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.