In some countries it is now possible for people to buy wide variety of foods transported from all over the world. To what extent do the benefits of this development outweigh the drawbacks?
It is true that these days people in few countries are able to buy different kind of foods which come from other parts of the world. In my opinion, the benefits of getting food abroad far greater than its drawbacks.
On the one hand, there are some minor disadvantages of transported food. The first main disadvantage is foodborne illnesses and deaths. For example, last year by some universities were estimated that over a half million foodborne illnesses occur annually in the world. As a result, over a hundred thousand cases requiring hospitalization, and about one thousand ends with lethal outcomes. Another additional disadvantage of this is, it addicts people to international food. As a consequence, people are likely to forget or stop eating traditional food, which may impact the cuisine of a country.
While transported food can bring immediate drawbacks, I am convicted that it is more likely to have long-term benefits for society and government. Firstly, foods from abroad always have a high quality. When foods are being imported, their quality is always checked and only the best products end up on markets. Secondly, imported food gives people access to more choices. For instance, some countries climate and land don’t allow growing all sorts of fruits and vegetables throughout the year, and in that case thanks to imported foods that people can have any time they desire.
In conclusion, despite some negative aspects, it seems to me that the assets of transported food are more significant for the reasons mentioned.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 391, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1593625498 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82414202232 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629482071713 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4519638392 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2142857143 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289873709339 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915318175116 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489982242342 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164605990977 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249580110143 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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