Recently it has been seen that people start living independently at younger age compared to old time when there was a combine family system. This change in social living has many pros and cons. In my opinion there are more benefits of living together compared to living by your own. Combine living has more advantages by helping for childcare and also play an important part for building strong family system.
One of the main positive effect for living together is economical savings.Now a days for a good living it is important that both partners should work . In this situation when they have children they need someone to take care of their children. At the same time if their parents are living with them, it can save a lot of money which they have to spend for childcare. It is more convenient too if they get help from home rather then spending time to bring children to daycare. So there are more benefits of living together then living independently.
Another advantage of living in a combine family is that this way children has good training from home. Children observe how their parents are treating other family members. This way children want to copy their parents. This is a good learning for children. This make them respectful and caring person. My parents stay with me and they are so helpful for me. Even my dad helps my little son for his homework. Whenever they go to visit my siblings, I feel I am missing a big help. So there are more benefits of living together then living independently.
In summery , it is very beneficial to live in combine family system. For a strong family system and a better living it is much better to live together.
- Successful sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other importantprofessions. some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both and give your own opinion. 70
- Government investment in the arts such as music and theatre is a waste of money Governments must invest this money in public services instead To what extent do yo u agree with this statement 80
- In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 60
- advancement in technology has lost traditional way of living. do you agree or disagree. 56
- People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.Discuss the causes 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, i feel, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1379.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69047619048 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46999663973 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517006802721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6907861637 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.95 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149749845169 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591472332441 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461168716391 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105080915266 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313686396097 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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