some people think that government should provide education for free on all levels,primary, secondary and tertiary. others believe that it is the responsibility of individual to pay for their own education. discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education is always been the main sole for progress of a country. In some people,s opinion , the government should provide free education to every one while others believe that every one should be responsible for their own education. This essay will elaborate both ideas with a final opinion.
On the one hand, many people argue that education should be available to everyone without any strain. It is seen that countries which have high literacy rate are more developed. For example countries like canada and Japan have free education to everyone . That is the main reason for progress of these countries. This way talented people get chance to show their abilities and are helpful for progress of country.
On the other hand , many people believe that education expense is not state,s responsibility. But it is individual effort. According to them, many people get education without any long term planning. Some people are not clear about their aptitude. This way it will be waste of money. If everyone is responsible for their own educational funding, they will be more serious. This way finances will be saved and will be spent for more crucial needs of country.There are many other fields like health and trade can benefit from this money.
In my opinion, I still think that education should be free of cost and equally available to everyone. This way every individual have equal rights. Well educated nation is a strong and successful nation.This way every country can become welfare state.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1249.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03629032258 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55881127065 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0831980855 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3888888889 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7777777778 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310117868903 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101272104848 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857808348274 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205839750125 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977483035167 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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