In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Today in some countries, the number of adults who continue to live with their parents is increasing even though they have graduated from college and had a stable job. Although this tendency brings benefits, in my opinion, I believe that the disadvantages that it brings are even more remarkable.
On the one hand, there are some advantages when grown-ups live with their family. Firstly, they are adequately taken care of from their fathers and mothers. For instance, when adults go home after work they do not worry about cooking meals because all of dishes are set up on the table by their mothers. And the fathers are likely to be people who often help young adults to fix something namely air-conditioning or washing machine in the house when it does not work or breaks down. As a result, young people do not have to do some trivial things instead of focusing on their career or further education. Secondly, if they met some financial issues, their parents would be great supporters. Indeed, although mature individuals could pay for their needs by their daily incomes, occasionally their parents have to help them to pay for other expenditures such as new motorbikes or new smart phones. Consequently, thanks to living with mums and dads, youngsters are not under much pressure regarding money problems.
On the other hand, I suppose that this trend may cause many disadvantages. The first drawback is that when if young people live with their parents in a long period of time, it means their independence would be reduced. And the explanation for this could be that whenever youngsters decide some important things about their career or future, they cannot perform it themselves by reason of they think their fathers would be the best people to do that. Therefore, day by day they may be unsecured and indecisive in their lives resulting in more challenges they would face in the prospect days. Another drawback is that due to most money issues solved and paid by their parents leading to the young ones are relying on them and maybe lost ability to manage their own budgets. As a consequence, they would encounter a great deal of problems when they might be able to not know how to manage their budgets effectively. In other words, they could spend a lot of cash on useless pieces of stuff which is the road into debt and makes their lives worse.
In conclusion, I would argue that although there are some advantages of the current trend when the young people have graduated or have jobs living with their parents, they are outweighed by the disadvantages as well as the most negative impact on them is fading of independent decisions.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eople live with their parents in a long period of time, it means their independence would be r...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83259911894 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57763087867 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4875113112 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7222222222 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373366879862 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119911002122 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745436948963 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259195472948 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505464459719 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...eople live with their parents in a long period of time, it means their independence would be r...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 54.0 24.0651302605 224% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83259911894 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57763087867 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497797356828 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 666.9 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.4875113112 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.888888889 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2222222222 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7222222222 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373366879862 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119911002122 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745436948963 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.259195472948 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505464459719 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.