In some countries, more and more adults are continuing to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is believed that there are some conflicting views about the fact that grown-ups prefer to stay with their parents, instead of seeking for jobs although they have graduated. While some people assume this situation may be beneficial for the adults since their money could be saved, I totally agree that the drawbacks of this issue is more than the prosperity it brings to society.
Firstly, for those who has just completed university, living with their parents seems to be a good idea because the young may not have enough money to rent a proper house. However, such action can be considered as a difficulty for parents since they have to bare more fee, even some of them only rely on the retired salary. According to a report published on VnExpress news, the rate of graduated students depends on their parents’ support has increased to about 45% in 2020, which led to many consequences, included but not limited to the laziness to find jobs or the lack of labor in recent years.
On the other hand, there are significant advantages that not only helps increase the economic development, but also improve the quality of a person’s life if adults become independent after graduating. When deciding to leave the family, labors tend to pay more effort to their work, which would stimulate the the rise of their company, furthermore, such hard-work also encourages them to become a good-manner person and lead them to a healthier lifestyle. In Norway, most young adults separated from their family after finishing school and it is reported that more than 75% of them have become successful not only in their career, but also in their private life comparing to the remained 35%.
In conclusion, the benefit of young generation leaving their parents to start their own career is beyond a doubt and this trend should be encouraged in every country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, even so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92356687898 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57090610429 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7415824829 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.777777778 106.682146367 161% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.8888888889 20.7667163134 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2222222222 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290228512364 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115459176961 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451437525509 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159490827516 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554836796204 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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