It is true that, in this contemporary era, technology is being advanced day by day but still we have lots of people who are extremely curious to know or find the real values behind the dilapidated buildings and infrastructure. Furthermore, in this essay we would discuss the reasons of this and how we can be researched.
To commence with, there are numerous masses who are well connected to their culture and want to acquire some knowledge that how their ancestors used to live and which type of things they used to do in their life. Secondly, there are some myth that in ancient time people used to hide their money, gold e.t.c. in land this may be a second reason why they prefer to know about places. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that we have got plethora of old products and they are made from high technologies so people come to know that how it is possible in past.
Looking at the other point, we have overabundance things to discover. Firstly, we can discuss with any archeological experts so they devote some knowledge about that buildings or places. Secondly, we are capable to purchase some dilapidated books in which we could easily get that information which we want to take because these books are very old then information will be always correct. Thirdly, we should go on our native place so we aquire different type of knowledge in easy way.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly we have different types of technologies and we can make any building according to our taste yet, we must understand that people are still connected with their dilapidated things and they want to learn about their history of buildings. Moreover, these moral values play a paramount role in life.
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of a house or a building they are living in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 61
- Some people think parents should supervise their children s activity closely while others believe that children should have more freedom discuss both views and give your own opinion 85
- Question An increasing number of people are buying what they need online What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online 78
- In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of a house or a building they are living in What are the reasons for this How can people research this 73
- in their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some ways Why is this Do you think this is a positive or negative development 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 572, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...le come to know that how it is possible in past. Looking at the other point, we have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77591973244 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69405830204 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52508361204 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.8426716689 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.818181818 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4545454545 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19450650892 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836974610622 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684596474881 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134630292998 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595601378163 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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