It is true that, in this contemporary era, museums and historical places are being gained more popularity among vistiors in all over the world. However, these places are not totally appropriate to encourage local residents. Therefore, in this essay, I am going to analysis the main challenges of having no demand of visiting historical one and try to put forward some possible situation accordingly as follows.
To commence with, many indigenous people believe that enough knowledge have been acquired by them. Moreover, Nothing is new in museums and in historical sites so if they would visit there then feel bored but for tourists everything is totally new that is why they prefer to visit. Another reason could be, masses know that every museums and historical places are in their vicinity so they procrastinate their plans. Last but not least, high entry fee is the main reason why local people do not like to visit again and again. Furthermore, it is not possible to pay high entry fee for looking same things or which we know very well. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that, during past decade 55% indigenous people do not like visiting any place because they have purchased some hard copies of everything.
Looking on the other view, there are overabundance of solutions to motivate people regarding museums and historical places. First and foremost, number of changes should be done by government like, they should adopt some technologies for changing interior of these buildings like, high advanced touch displays, colourful lighting for enhancing the interior and so on.
Additionally, campaigns can be started by administration for providing the value of our history or cultural values and what have our freedom fighters done for us.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, nothing is new and people feel bored whenever they visit same place again and again yet, we must understand that history and cultural values play an indispensable role in everyone's life. Eventually, there are plethora of solutions which can easily encourage our residents like, campaigns, some changes in interior and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17291066282 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75508543008 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567723342939 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7928565977 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.214285714 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353609446702 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110552627233 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607801904193 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164935578528 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921662681876 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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