In some countries, most people prefer to rent a house rather than buying once. Describe advantages and disadvantages of renting.
According to the statement, in few nations , most of the masses are preferred to live in those houses in which they pay rent for staying as compared to buy their own house, in contemporary settings. There are various merits and demerits which are shown the explanation of this statement in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, there are some ways which shows the merit points of renting a house rather than buy it. The major reason behind this is busy working schedules in which mostly people prefer traveling. In contemporary settings, most of the individuals do work in MNCs or companies in which they travel from one country to another for their business works or so on. Therefore, it is more preferable for them to pay rent for a house for a particular time until they live there. Moreover, the another factor behind renting house is their financial conditions because some people do not have enough property or money to buy a house. If, they take loans or other home schemes from banks or legal comities. Then, this will become a threat for them. Because, if they will not able to return that lend. Then, as a result, they will become homeless and may also go in poverty line. Therefore, they prefer to rent a house rather buy.
On contrary, there are also few areas against renting houses and prefer to buy their own accommodation because there are some demerits about renting homes. The first and foremost reason is commfortness and stressless life which people feel in their own houses. Because, in their own houses, they renovate and set up the decoration of their own choices and strategies. Due to this, they feel more comfortable, peaceful and calm because they rest in their own designed environment. In addition, the another reason behind this is the problem of money. For instance, if a person stay in a rental home and at a time, he or she is not able to pay charges for rent. In this criteria, they have no option except to leave that house and will become lack of shelter above head. Due to this, mostly masses indirectly go into stress and depression because of this financial problems. Therefore, most of the masses believe the it is better to have their own house rather than rent it.
To conclude, according to few individuals and I personally believe that there are equal number of positive and negative aspects which shows the choice of people of renting or buying home once.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 420.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72857142857 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48218640966 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.471428571429 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3645604292 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2727272727 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291468047237 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100683230483 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117132364655 0.0667982634062 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187838106612 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063378749357 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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