In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
It is said that folks in certain countries have a preference for owning a home over renting one. Ownership of a place might be inessential, yet for some others it is an intrinsic part of their life.
The primary reason for the phenomenon of being homeowners is related to human’s nature, they endeavor to acquire possessions. Our ancestors were frequently in danger due to lack of stable places, consequently, that created a longing for safe shelters which have been known as home since mankind’s evolution. The state of possessing something soothes and makes people feel mentally and physically safe.
Secondly, a homeowner can possibly become a landlord and rent their own place out for profit. Especially, landlords who live in populated cities have several chances to do this kind of business. For instance, many homeowners decorate their home to open shops, hotels, motels, or even coffee shops. This type of business is all-pervasive in big cities in Vietnam namely Ha Noi and Ho Chi Minh city. They no longer worry about the damage of the place anymore because tenants take responsibility for it.
Renting a place, however, also has merits. As for those who do not take possession of a place do not need to be concerned about purchasing furniture and tax which could be considered a drawback for homeowners. Additionally, it is effortless for them to move to other areas at any time they want. Furthermore, tax is imperative for a country to maintain its national treasury and helps run the country more smoothly.
To recapitulate, both renting and owning a home have advantages and disadvantages, nonetheless, I strongly believe that the benefits brought about by owning one certainly surpass its imperfection.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 23, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...cally safe. Secondly, a homeowner can possibly become a landlord and rent their own pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1519434629 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97304836726 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657243816254 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7208815327 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257624280899 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791992455177 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481928829717 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141730198656 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511781178717 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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