In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
Do you agree or disagree?
In many nations, many individuals prefers owning a home to renting one and it is important for them. I disagree with this point of view.
To begin, there are some reasons that could explain why almost people choose owining a home. Firstly, it can provide the privacy for the owners. For instance, people do not have to live with different people coming from distinct place, which can provide the space for the owners to do anything they like without worrying about disturbing strangers. Secondly, it increase the motivation of people. In fact, owning a house requires a high financial condition, therefore if people want to purchase a house, they need to work harder, resulting in a higher effort.
On the other hand, I believe that renting a home is much better. In terms of the first benefit, renting home makes people have some funny moments with new friends. In fact, they have partners to talk, to share feelings and support some works resulting in sharing the house chores together such as divide chores fairly with members. Regarding another advantage, people can save huge amount of money from sharing the cost with other roommates, which leads to release financial burden on students. For example, when you rent a house with four people, you just need to pay about 25% of the total cost.
In conclusion, while some people reckon that owing a house is good, I believe that renting a home is better for them in the long term future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 363, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: increases
...bout disturbing strangers. Secondly, it increase the motivation of people. In fact, owni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1198.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81124497992 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34216784835 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59437751004 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2063929071 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1538461538 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3846153846 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248728308496 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846663990838 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534315174044 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155637506389 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0402346746342 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.