In some countries owning a home rather than a renting one is very important for people. What might be this case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The ownership of home is very mandatory for people instead of renting in some Nations. This is because of the higher rent they have to pay and in my opinion it is a positive development as by owning home they can get more freedom to do anything they want.
In some countries, individuals pay higher rents for apartments for living purpose. As the landlord have to pay higher taxes for their properties as a result of that they increase the rents of their apartment. On the other hand, the landlord provide amenities to the tenants like internet, electronics furniture, kitchen tools etc. Because of these facilities provided they charge extra but sometimes people have to cope with this problem as they have less wages but more expenses. For example, in metropolitan cities rents are fixed in specific regions according to the facilities provided.
There are list of advantages of owning home. Firstly, if an individual have a home they can definitely get more freedom to do anything they wish. As in renting homes they have to follow it rules and regulation of landlords like restriction on parts, using loud speaker at night, late night coming etc. While in own home anybody can enjoy freedom under no restrictions. Secondly, they cannot spend money to decorate, renovate homes as these are not permanent but by having own home people can decorate it according to their will permanently. For instance, some people are introvert and do not like to share their space with others they do not have to compromise with other people.
In conclusion, from my point of view, this is a positive development as people can save their monthly paying rents in their future savings and as well as the can get more privacy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun wages is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... savings and as well as the can get more privacy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86689419795 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60619036424 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511945392491 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2847011017 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3571428571 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222078095456 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963512705079 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609844314635 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162650282262 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653787371185 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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