In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why is this the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, owning a home rather than renting is crucial for people. There might be several reasons behind it. Let's discuss the points in this essay.
Firstly, owning a home is considered to be important in many countries such as India, Bangladesh ,Srilanka etc because they think it's better to save money rather than spending it on rent. If you build a home, you need not think about the rent. You can be rent-free in your home. Even the interior designing can be done according to us.Besides, this you can also get rent from the people if you build an extra portion for your home.This is the positive fact you can observe here.
In contrast to it, some people think that staying in a rented home is better because they can't afford it. Adding to it, they feel safe in a rented home. Besides, this point some people believe that they used to invest in building home becuase it requires a plethora of hardwork.
Nowadays, people are buying a readyhome instead of building home which requires a lot of hardwork and is quite pressurising.Genuinely, I feel that owning a home is better rather than renting because it is like a future saving for us.
I would conclude saying that, I depends on the person's perspective whether he wants to own a home or stay in rented home. For everything there is a pros and cons of it. So, we need to think wisely before taking any decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, so, i feel, in contrast, such as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57258064516 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60396469907 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560483870968 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 357.3 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 64.5551891716 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7142857143 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92857142857 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38130824883 0.244688304435 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137011837502 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777753312579 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215047671594 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646148302376 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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