In some countries people who are unemployed receive a sum of money each week in the form of a benefit. While some support this, other people believe that this money should not be given. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary epoch, unemployment become a global menace due to population explosion. Some people are of the opine that, it is the first assignment of regime to impart monetary endorsement to unemployed folks. By contrast, others have conflicting views. This essay tend to account both the views with my perspective.
To commence with, the people can manage their household outlays with granted money to live prosperous life. To eludicate, people especially who are married encounter distant heardships while fulfilling the basic needs of their family like food, shelter and clothes. Consequently, a commendable role is played by the assistance which is given by higher authorities in order to upsurge the living standard of civilians. Moreover, some people who are disabled and unable to perform the work. Therefore, they are suffering from starvation, criticism and health disorders under the absence of financial aid. Thence, folks should be provided with the monetary assistance from the regime. on the contrary, it it has darker side too.
Initially, higher authorities, especially in thriving nations have to face financial instabilities if they are suppposed to be helping the unemployed citizen with the finance as they already under the burden of providing supreme amenities to its residents. how this sort of aid contribute in making civilians lethargic? People are expected to underestimate the importance of toiling hard in the presence of financial help from higher authorities. Therefore, the idea of giving financial help to unemployed people does not fully holds water.
To recapitulate, the ultimate goal of modern government is to be blessed the people with happy life.
According to my notion, a balanced and logical approach should be adopted by the government while allocating the funds to different fields.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, sort of, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48421052632 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97107425701 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.7102495731 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9411764706 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7647058824 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254393648818 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710947790419 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454973677114 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122656453428 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514999754849 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.