Nowadays in some countries the number of children aged 15 and younger increasing.what are the current and future effects of ever increasing population?
Presently,the birth rate has increased enormously in some nations, leading to the growth of young juveniles. So, this trend has both positive and negative impacts on a country. Here, I would like to account for current and forthcoming consequences of this phenomenon.
Numerous points can be considered to show the positive effects of this fad. First and foremost, the youth generation has a remarkable contribution in flourishing tha prosperity of a region. To exemptify, younger blood are is expected to acquire an education in order to being a successful person in life and therefore education bestows the prodigious professionals to sociey which contribute to boost the economy of a country. Moreover, as the youthful bees are adoptive, creative, energetic and agile, welcome the advancement in technology with open arms which brought a gigantic revolution in the working segment. Consequently, consistent upsurging in number of young people has big bag of merits. On the contrary,it has darker side too.
Initially, the unemployment will be on the peak with the enhancement in proportion of youngsters because the number of seekers will in excess compare to job vacancies. Besides this, individuality of a culture would be at low ebb as the young masses have the tendency to follow their own ways and living standard rather than following cultural values. Thence, the increment in younger would has adverse effects on mankind and society.
To recapitulate, undeniably this Trend would would have some jeopardy effects on a nation but according to my notion, youngster set's the foundation of a prosperous country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35546875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08766516116 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9080021619 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.461538462 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6923076923 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10142417572 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335566110638 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357774944343 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598286603178 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206633151156 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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