In some countries, small town-center shops are going out of business because people tend to drive to large out-of-town stores. As a result, people without cars have limited access to out-of-town stores, and it may result in an increase in the use of cars.
Do you think the disadvantages of this change outweigh its advantages?
These days, more and more people prefer to do shopping at large malls rather than small local stores. It is often said that this trend may have negative effects on shoppers who have not their own cars and it could contribute to increase in automobile usage. This essay will outline the benefits and drawbacks of this trend and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are a number of advantages of doing shopping by going to large shopping malls where are placed relatively far away from the local stores. Perhaps the main advantage of this trend is that big stores offer people to have access of variety of products in a single building, as a result, they might not need to go to another shopping centre to find an another product which they need. A good illustration of this is that a person can both purchase a computer and some grocery products in a modern large shopping mall, whereas they could not find those products in a local store simultaneously.
Despite these arguments, these are also various disadvantages. One of the most obvious of these is that people who have not a personal car could not access easily to large out-of-town stores. As a result of this, their shopping preferences might be limited. A further point against this is that the large malls may cause to decrease in competitiveness in the market. If a store will be a monopoly in the market, product prices are highly likely settled by these stores, which could negatively affect on the consumers’ favour. Another one, it may cause growth in the use of automobiles , which may result in the air pollution by increasing carbon emissions.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that going for shopping to large out-of-town stores has had an overall negative effect on the people’s favour and nature.
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Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a product' or 'another product'.
Suggestion: a product; another product
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Message: Did you mean 'decreasing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: decreasing
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, whereas, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88709677419 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71285470483 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525806451613 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7839139606 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.538461538 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8461538462 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297854303865 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10494618103 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929843178577 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18970675526 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561887802436 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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