Today, more and more companies have a tendency to operate their wholesale stores in the outskirts, resulting in the fact that people will need to own their vehicles to access these supermarkets. Therefore, some concerns are raised for not only central shopping malls but also the society. However, we cannot deny some of the benefits of this issue which will be analyzed in this essay.
It is obvious that there are two drawbacks of this situation. Firstly, residents’ life is much more convenient thanks to a wide range of public amenities and central department stores are not the exception. Hence, it is ubiquitous to see flocks of people going to the shops in metropolises for shopping or window shopping with their families, which is considered as their regular hobby to unwind and bond with their companions. If these small town-center stores went down, it would be a negative effect on their life in terms of recreational activities. Furthermore, the environment is also concerned due to the high needs of their own automobiles in order to approach shopping malls in the suburbs. In other words, the more people possess their own transport, the more pressure we may see on road systems as well as pollution problems. It is clear that these consequences totally contribute to the widely acknowledged trouble caused by humans’ activities.
On the other hand, it is possible for the government to tackle the problems and make use full of this trend. When people go to the suburbs for shopping, the severe situations in colossal cities can be solved, as well. For example, there is no traffic jam or traffic congestion in rush hours or at the weekends. Another thing is that going on a one-day trip can be a precious chance for families to strengthen their relationships. This means that people are able to take their mind off work and concentrate on the period of time that they are spending with their beloved people. Additionally, companies themselves can be beneficial from their new location. Specifically, they are capable of serving and offering their customers with high-qualified products with a very reasonable price mainly because setting away from cities allows them to cut costs on expenses and operational activities. Finally, the trend also creates job opportunities for local people so they are willing to stay and stop migrating to the center.
In conclusion, there are both apparent demerits and merits of this phenomenon. However, if the governments have a feasible solution such as public transport to the outskirts, they will address the trouble and benefits not only people but also the businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, another thing, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10854503464 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89480102124 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 176.041082164 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540415704388 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5691507492 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.6 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.65 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108698982683 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0305780021956 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285844439299 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688014870996 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0209056220278 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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