In some countries, some people think that women should have equality with men in particular equal rights to work as police officers or serve in the army. Others think women are not suitable for such jobs. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
It is undeniable that women are becoming more powerful and educated in recent days to take their responsibility. some people reckon that women deserve equal rights to men to work in army to serve the country. By contrast, others claim that women are not flexible for army and police jobs. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to endrose the former view. First and foremost, Women should get right to serve the country as an army because of their abilities. To demonstrate, nowadays, women are well educated, privileged, advance to complete their responsibilities and also able to make the flexible to fit and handle the situations that can be arise as being police officer. Futhermore, Women in defence sector will promote their self-esteem, dignity and respect in the society. Taking a real life example in to consideration, most of Nepalese Women are making choice for the jobs in army and police. They are gaining respect in the society. on the contrary it has throny sides too.
For instance, Women are more emotional than men due to which they are less able to handle situation like war. In addition to that, women are physically and mentally less strong as compared to men to handle the fights among victims.
In conclusion, There are evidences which show women should get rights to do job as an army because of their abilities. But it is also clear that, women are less strong as mentally and physically to face situations happened in the society. I think women should get opportunity and a chance to prove themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, well, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1028.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94230769231 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71324278135 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.9 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.2285235422 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174665446521 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650036675276 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442825137388 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123291032309 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203732723171 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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