Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in public
buildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages and
disadvantages?
although tobacco products such as cigarettes and smoking pipes are addictive substances, they have been consumed by people freely. I agree with those who think that consuming such products should be banned because of the physical and mental problems that people might face by using them.
On the one hand, smoking pipes and using cigarettes often can lead to some health problems, in long-term. The people who are addicted to tobacco not only themselves, but also their family members might suffer from respiratory diseases. For example, smokers are more likely to stricken by lung concern. In addition to this, consuming the addictive substances seems to affect human nervous system. For instance, the most of addicted people are more aggressive than ordinary people and do not have mental balance. As a result, government should ban the production process as well as the consumption of such products.
On the other hand, some claim that smoking pipes and using other types of addictive products can not only help individuals to forget their problems, ranging from emotional to financial, but also help them to meet the nerve-racking period that they are undertaken. However, this solution would be temporary and more importantly leads to many harmful effects both mentally and physically. As a result, using tobacco should be made illegal and government should raise the awareness of people about the negative consequences of consuming such substances.
In conclusion, although using tobacco has been allowed freely, it seems to me, it should be banned due to the health problem caused by consuming it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Although
although tobacco products such as cigarettes and...
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Suggestion:
...hat people might face by using them. On the one hand, smoking pipes and using...
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...as the consumption of such products. On the other hand, some claim that smoki...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31128404669 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65968037188 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4578760587 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102224704967 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412445689254 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393868944468 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691913824237 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274215967995 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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