Furthermore; while tobacco products are making illegal, they will be sold by drug dealer. So drug seller due to a higher profit, might supply the drugs with dangerous substance which are cheaper. Therefore, this measure could be damaged to people healthy and generated more cost for society. In particular, a good illustration for that is people who had bought alcoholic drink from illegal provider, after consumed, they became blind. Hence, if alcohol were legal, consumers wouldn’t buy from criminal source, at least they wouldn’t become disable to eyesight
In sum, considering the points discussed above, the most fundamental conclusion is that making tobacco products illegal will not help people to reduce their usages or give up their bad habits. On the contrary, this decision will make more trouble for people mentally and physically
Smoking always has been a controversial topic in human society and it has created a lot of problem in youngster. Some people argued that all substance related to tobacco are banned. In my view, although, most addiction substance are harmful for people, it should not be forbidden, but it could be limited for many ages.
Firstly; the main reason why some products such as cigarette must be free, is that respect to human basic right. In other word, everybody should have due to choose their a way to life. Secondly; another compelling justification is when something is forbidden, it cause greedy react in people. As psychologist said, if people are avoided to use something or have its, they become more and more eager to utilize that specific thing. For example, some addiction drugs which are illegal in many countries such as marijuana and heroin, but youngster try their best to buy and use them. As result, forbidding things not only haven’t reduced the usage but also have led to more enthusiastic to experience them.
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in publicbuildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages anddisadvantages? 56
- Some countries today have passed laws against smoking tobacco in publicbuildings such as offices and restaurants. What are the advantages anddisadvantages? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
Furthermore; while tobacco products are making ille...
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Line 3, column 83, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun problem seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of problems'.
Suggestion: a lot of problems
...pic in human society and it has created a lot of problem in youngster. Some people argued that a...
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Line 3, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot be forbidden, but it could be limited for many ages. Firstly; the main reason...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...rd, everybody should have due to choose their a way to life. Secondly; another compel...
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Line 4, column 263, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...tion is when something is forbidden, it cause greedy react in people. As psychologist...
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Line 4, column 709, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o more enthusiastic to experience them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, in particular, such as, in my view, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15309446254 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69638774083 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615635179153 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5528062612 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2142857143 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0854754292947 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0324405358556 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330807567116 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502678744108 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374896725447 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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