In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
In the recent years, the trend of parents having their first child when they are substantially older and matured has been seen, while is often contributed by the mentality that children often act as a barrier to their career growth. There are multitude of pros and cons associated with this issue, which are discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, parents who have their children at a very young age often face multiple hardships in tending for the needs as they aren't financially and emotionally matured. Thus, having seen the repercussions of such examples in the society, people nowadays often delay having children until they are economically stable to bear the responsibility. Moreover, people in their youth nowdays are mostly driven to their careers which takes a lot of their time, such that having a responsibility of rearing a child becomes impossible for them until they retire.
On one hand, this trend has the advantage that the parents are generally in a stable point of their life, both economically as well as mentally. Furthermore, they have enough time and resources in-hand to spend with their child in their later years, while they would not have the opportunity in their earlier years as they have to grind at work, having no time and energy left to spend with their children,
While on the other hand, fertility in people is often a ticking clock, such that people need to resort to expensive means, like IVF or Surrogacy, to have their child. Additionally, as the parents grow older risks associated pregnancy are amplifies as well, which in most cases endangers the child's and the mother's life. Though the most siginficant of the disadvantages as reported by The New York Times in its recent article is that when parents grow older, though having enough time, money, and stability, people do not have the energy to tend for a young one.
In conclusion, as people are growing sensible in the recent years, they prefer to have children when they are older, which is when they are more stable mentally and emotionally to handle the responsibility. There are myriads of advantages of this as the parents have enough resources and time to spend for childcare, which in general outweighs the disadvantages, yet the risks associated to health of the parents and their new ones should not be glossed over.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: aren't
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... point of their life, both economically as well as mentally. Furthermore, they have enough...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'mothers'' or 'mother's'?
Suggestion: mothers'; mother's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in most cases, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1959.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 394.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97208121827 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67857900535 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.464467005076 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.6015605944 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 178.090909091 106.682146367 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8181818182 20.7667163134 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4545454545 7.06120827912 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346823886343 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139690182194 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502296881485 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217041938055 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237346280133 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.0946893788 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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