Exploration is a good way to enhance knowledge, few nations advocating this trend after completion of school exams, although the merits are outweighing the demerits, in my opinion it’s better to have a gap year for work or outing, in this essay I will discuss both how it benefiting the young generation.
To commence with, seeking knowledge only possible when we move out of bounds, it’s very important to explore different things and parts so that they can decide easily about their future, however it necessary because nowadays everything changing at high pace, for instance, if a person wants to study outside their country for professional course they should visit that place so that they will friendly with all such as, nature, climate, language and community, Moreover, its excellent utilization of their leisure time. I totally reckon this idea.
Furthermore, other youngster who do not want to skip their study they prefer continuity without break between their studies, while it will give them only college environment addition to that they can be ahead by one year at university, but ultimately, they also require exposer after completion and it sometimes deter their practical skills, even though they leg in co-operation with foreign environment it may leads to change fields, change streams and many other issues. Consequently, its important to withdraw themselves for a year for exposer.
In capsulation, taking break from study for jobs and experience or to visit new places is an effective strategy of the nations, in my opinion it has supremacy over its drawbacks, in future it should be good to implement it, because this will minimize the public fear and enhance the overall personality.
- The diagram below illustrates the carbon cycle in nature 67
- Ensuring that children have regular physical exercise should be the responsibility of parents and therefore schools should not waste valuable school time having sports lessons as part of the curriculum To what extent do you agree 81
- Most people agree that money cannot bring happiness why is happiness difficult to define how can people achieve happiness give a reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience 78
- Some people say that History is one of the most important school subjects Others think that in today s world subjects like science and technology are more important than History Discuss both these views and give your opinion 79
- Many people charge admission fees while others are free Do the advantages of charging people to visit a museum outweigh the disadvantages 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'deters'?
Suggestion: deters
...poser after completion and it sometimes deter their practical skills, even though the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19855595668 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.746198732 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667870036101 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 20.2975951904 227% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 183.714830346 49.4020404114 372% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 240.0 106.682146367 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 46.1666666667 20.7667163134 222% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.8333333333 7.06120827912 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135670094202 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683477118695 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457244520966 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785584684461 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259051601664 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.1 13.0946893788 199% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.79 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.1190380762 202% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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