Some teenagers are recommended to take a gap year between graduating from high school and starting higher education in some nations. This trend would create both merits and demerits
On the one hand, a gap year would create a great number of benefits. Since we do not have to spend much money on gasoline costs as well as learning courses, financial burden of higher education could be eliminated to some extent. As a result, we appear to save a great amount of money and could use that amount of money for other things.To exemplify this point, my brother, who takes a gap year to refresh himself after years of studying saved ten thousand Vietnam Dong. After that, he runs a business himself and earned a stable salary
On the other hand, there are still some drawbacks of a gap year. A gap year is often so relaxing and enjoyable that pupils may give up further studies. As a consequence, they might be bored with their study and could neglect it, which would have an adverse impact on their study performance in the long run. Moreover, a gap year seems to be quite expensive to individuals who have unstable family backgrounds. They might encounter myriad of obstacles when taking a gap year since the gap year cost is not always affordably priced. Admittedly, a gap year would offer many advantages to people. But it is not always good to take a gap year unless you are truly in need of it.
For all the aforementioned reasons, I still believe that the merits of a gap year outweigh the demerits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, still, well, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1237.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61567164179 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50895866444 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9044510291 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.083333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156952551469 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063409181692 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418330865151 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111337885733 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338398351062 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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