“In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.”
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
People nowadays have different views about whether or not graduate students should be promoted to take a gap year before entering university. This essay will look at this decision from both perspectives.
To start with, gap year students will have to deter the continuation of their study for a long time, which can generate the feeling of being left behind others and lose some momentum. Furthermore, the expenses related to the gap year could make college more difficult for young adults. These two reasons are the most considerations when parents and students decide to have a year off.
On the other side of this argument, rather than spending much time on papers and plenty of assignments, people who have a year to explore the beauty of the world on their own may gain a significant number of practical experiences and knowledge before starting university. There is a saying that: “Travel broadens the mind” – stating the importance of stepping out our comfort zone to challenge ourselves with something new in the real world. In addition to this, a gap year can facilitate advance soft skills and improve people’s existing skills in life such as communication, teamwork, time management or leader skill. These skills make a significant contribution to people’s life afterward as well as develop as a person. In the final analysis, spending time to work or travel will give enhance our résumé by providing valuable skills that any employer will be impressed by.
In conclusion, it seems to me that students should give themselves the best chance to have a successful, refreshing experience in their unique lifetime and gap year is one of the great choices.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...ple nowadays have different views about whether or not graduate students should be promoted to...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and students decide to have a year off. On the other side of this argument, rath...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, may, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12996389892 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89544189751 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628158844765 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.9243881512 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214960053949 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771638524341 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330814220556 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105605955022 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060095689759 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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