“Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.” Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is considered by some people that the extinction of some plants and animals lead to the main problem of our environment in recent years, while others deem that there are more dangerous concerns. This essay will look at these views before a reasonable conclusion is given.
On the one hand, the continual loss of plants and animals is believed to be the most concerns because of its impacts. Plants and animals underpin our life on Earth, they provide a huge amount of oxygen and food, as well as making up the backbone of the world’s ecosystems. For example, the predators in the food chain cannot feed themselves when their quarries have no longer existed. The extinction of some species will likely have a domino effect on the fragile ecosystems of the Earth. Species diversity ensures resilience; consequently, the lack of it has a vastly impact on our existence.
On the other hand, there are undisputed facts about humans' habitat today, which has been directly caused by other problems such as air pollution, climate change, and global warming...The evidence of these issues are there for us all to see: According to the World Health Organization, the very air we breathe is growing dangerously polluted: nine out of ten people now breathe polluted air, which kills 7 million people every year; the rising sea levels are drastically changing the landscape of what we already know, leading to the disappearance of large land areas and even some countries. We should not underestimate these vital problems and need immediate solutions to address this.
In conclusion, both these points of views have their own reasons. Nevertheless, I still personally believe that we need to give short-term and long-term resolutions for the higher properties’ issues.
- Some people believe that newspaper is the best way to learn about news. While others believe that more effective way is through other media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 89
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. 73
- Nowadays, some employers think that formal academic qualifications are more important than life experience or personal qualities when they look for new employees. Why is it the case? Do you agree/ disagree with this view? 84
- “Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.” Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 84
- Some people believe that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 566, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('vastly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('impact') instead of another adjective.
...ience; consequently, the lack of it has a vastly impact on our existence. On the other hand...
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Line 5, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...n, climate change, and global warming...The evidence of these issues are there for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, look, nevertheless, so, still, well, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13793103448 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84281851733 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648275862069 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 140.99797783 49.4020404114 285% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.454545455 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190346292674 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0663560824885 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403342209873 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111878548314 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031832781014 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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