In some countries young people are excouroged worker or travels for one year between finishing high school and starting university studies discuss the advantage for young people who decide to do his.
Study is very important in every person to gain knowledge. One of the most controversial issues today relates to some countries and young people are worker or travel ecceptable to one year gap. In this essay , I am going to examine this question from both point of views. Who argue that advantages while considerable out weight disadvantages.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the young people are increases experies day by day. It is also possible to say that in people can earn money and one year extra to go to travel for people every person to gain knowledge day by day. One good illustration of this is next year can deposit the money and he relaxed feel . All countries can travel to her. He can usually money and travel to with her. He can reste in at time.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case. It is often argued that infact on your work. However young people are decreases experies and people wasted time. People are can amoung best job. He will not properly clear studies money are wasting by people. We will be not decreases knowledge one year gap not acceptable. People not deposit money. And he is not attempt work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 1615.20841683 60% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51627906977 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37482388518 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53488372093 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 506.74238477 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.8014207884 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.9444444444 106.682146367 51% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.9444444444 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294009528291 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847579366212 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897095288397 0.0667982634062 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203886569192 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0304257649018 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 13.0946893788 44% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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