In some countries young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies What do you think are the causes of this What solution can you suggest

Essay topics:

In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies.

What do you think are the causes of this?
What solution can you suggest?

It is said that in several countries, under the huge amount of pressure from schoolwork, adolescents and children spend less time on relaxation. This trend can be attributed to a host of reasons and I believe it will be solved by solutions I suggest.

To begin with, a number of issues can be considered to have caused the fall in the amount of spare time. First and foremost, I assume that no child would fritter away their rest after being snowed under school assignments if their parents didn't impose stress on them. Free time is restricted so that the children concentrate on their unrealistic demand. With regard to the school pressure, one obvious reason is that the majority of students and parents believe that their children will be more likely to land themselves a well-paid job. Recent decades have witnessed a radical increase in the number of students applying in colleges and universities, on which the have to work hard to pass the entrance examination and obtain a satisfying degree.

From my perspective, we can take various measures to tackle this problem. For the most part, I believe we should start with raising the public awareness about balancing studies and entertainment. In reality, public recognition in the importance of outdoor activities is still low which leads to the sedentary lifestyle among students. Second, in some areas, play centres, food stalls and many other recreation spots should renovate and diversify their range of services. Facilities are so monotomous or extravagant that those places cannot draw the youth's attention.

To conclude,I believe students should not be made to be filled with anxiety and worry about their career as they deserve to devote their energy to both indoor and outdoor activities.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, still, well, to begin with, with regard to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11458333333 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73827598718 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9819485896 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.307692308 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1538461538 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1615228051 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537405084817 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354615204105 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090423922849 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436599729952 0.056905535591 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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