Are you one of these people who are struggling to have leisure time? Nowadays, majority of youngsters have less time to involve in activities and therefore, have difficulties on focusing on their studies. But what are the reasons for these?
Firstly, too much of assignments given by teachers hinder students to fulfill their hobbies. For instance year 11 students in Malaysia have lots of worksheets to complete due to their final examination. Thus, these deteriorates students from relaxation and recuperation. One of the way to avoid this is to reduce the amount of task given by the teachers. These would benefit students to take part in any sports activities they want.
Secondly, advancement of technology had played a significant impact. With the reliable use of mobile phone games, juvenates are addicted to it. In other words,pupils spent long hours on these irresistable gadgets. Research by Harvard University shows that people who invest their time playing computer online games can lead to sedentary lifestyle. As a result, they tend to have lack of spare time.moverover, students studies are greatly affected by it. But what are the solutions to it? parents must monitor their childrens and limit the use of computer games. These helps them to cope up with their studies in terms of leisure time.
In conclusion, it is evident that there are various reasons which restricts people to catch up on their studies and measures can be taken to tackle the problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pupils
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Parents
...y it. But what are the solutions to it? parents must monitor their childrens and limit ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12809917355 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79425936347 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615702479339 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9565090367 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2352941176 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214907932112 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744135450642 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075808603116 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133082879274 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748495924537 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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