It is needless to say that young and old generations are mandatory for an individual countries well-being,both are the vital source of development. Some countries give prefrence to the old age while other culture opine that youth is more significant but i argue that both are equally imperative.
To commence with,it is well said proverb that old is gold,elders have more experience than others,including this there are numerous reasons that why old age people are important. Firstly, they are very conductive as they always help others and give their best in everything. Besides that,patience plays an vital role in our life and it is interesting thing to note that elders have this.secondly in the situations of ups and down they always give helping hands.To illustrate, they participate in family chores as well as they had good name in the society as all the people take advice from them. Therefore, they are the ones who secure our culture and traditions.
However, youth is also significant for a country development, as its boost the economy and sociol growth. Moreover, world is become a global village where we have to do our most of the work on computer,on the other side old person not able to do this whereas youngsters are perfect in this activity. Proceeding further, grey haired dwellers are often have faded memory, they do not memorise things for a long time. Teenagers have strong catching power ,as they do job and work in which they do hardwork but elders do not have strength like young ones. For instance, some occupations contain work of loadings and older people did not have capabilities as juveniles. Thus, youth is also plays paramount role in countries as well.
To sum up, I strongly believe that both are imperative, as old age people advisers and experienced person,while youth is the nation builder.
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , both
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...,elders have more experience than others,including this there are numerous reasons that wh...
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...e their best in everything. Besides that,patience plays an vital role in our life and it ...
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...everything. Besides that,patience plays an vital role in our life and it is intere...
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...e people advisers and experienced person,while youth is the nation builder.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99674267101 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85276567985 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7837507827 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173993430001 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730428253678 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104705527691 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136159088606 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100597768576 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , both
...y for an individual countries well-being,both are the vital source of development. So...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 255, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...pine that youth is more significant but i argue that both are equally imperative....
^
Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... equally imperative. To commence with,it is well said proverb that old is gold,e...
^^^
Line 3, column 58, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , elders
...it is well said proverb that old is gold,elders have more experience than others,includ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , including
...,elders have more experience than others,including this there are numerous reasons that wh...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 288, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , patience
...e their best in everything. Besides that,patience plays an vital role in our life and it ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...everything. Besides that,patience plays an vital role in our life and it is intere...
^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...and down they always give helping hands.To illustrate, they participate in family ...
^^
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , on
...e to do our most of the work on computer,on the other side old person not able to d...
^^^
Line 5, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...me. Teenagers have strong catching power ,as they do job and work in which they do...
^^
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...e people advisers and experienced person,while youth is the nation builder.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, while, for instance, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99674267101 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85276567985 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57328990228 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7837507827 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.9230769231 7.06120827912 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173993430001 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730428253678 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104705527691 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136159088606 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100597768576 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.