Some educationalists say that every child should be taught how to play a musical instrument. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is believed by some educational experts that it is important for children to be able to play musical instruments. From my point of view, I totally agree with this statement because of some following reasons.
On the one hand, playing musical instruments could help children relieve stress and mediate mental issues. It is undeniable that some students have an emotional problem, which they get from school or home. In this case, some psychologists recommend fỏ them to relaxation approach including learning how to play an instrument because it has a unique effect on their emotions and has even been proven to lower heart rate and blood pressure. As a result, if students learn to play one, it would help them avoid some diseases such as anxiety or panic attacks.
On the other hand, not only does playing music instruments help ease the burden but also makes children smarter. A lot of recent studies have shown that there is a correlation between musical training and academic success, especially in children. Learning to play an instrument stimulates the brain, improves functions like memory and abstract reasoning skills, which are essential for maths and science.
To summarize, playing musical instruments brings children lots of advantages that can not be denied. I personally think that parents should encourage their children to pursue playing musical instruments because this ability benefits any child and that it should have been from a young age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17647058824 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66360044276 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626050420168 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0550603278 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6363636364 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246317485877 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979375149978 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479483298817 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157452137829 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406799812566 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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