Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Some experts feel that the children should learn a foreign language at the primary stage, not wait till the secondary stage.
I strongly agree with this view and I perceive that the merits of the early foreign language learning outweigh the downsides of this view as this essay will reveal.
Studying the essential subjects like, Math, Science and the mother language in primary schools is more important than studying foreign language, as some people think. Thus students should expand their time well and concentrate on the main subjects not on the foreign language. Furthermore, this foreign language could interfere with the native language, makes the student becomes confused, retards the child development in his/her mother language.
However, I support the concept of early foreign language learning, since the child in the early age, has mental potential to learn many language according to some research that showed that the child could learn till five varied languages within the early age owing to the active mental ability. Therefore, the schools have to exploit this tremendous mental power. Moreover, this will pave the way for the child to learn foreign language at its advanced levels in the secondary stage without exerting a lot of effort, which, in turn, assist the student to develop effectively in this language.
In conclusion, albeit some believe it's better for children to learn foreign language in the secondary phase instead of primary phase. I opine with studying foreign language has several benefits such as, utilizing the mental power of the child as well as preparing the child for studying the advanced modules of the second language, that outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 103, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to outweigh'
Suggestion: to outweigh
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to learn many language according to some research that showed that the child coul...
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Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to till'
Suggestion: to till
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4800239981 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503676470588 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.430355509 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.2 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369676067652 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156731494765 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0884412403226 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217001152308 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516274454492 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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