Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages ?
age skills , hence they become multilingual which is beneficial for their overall growth and thier are many student who want to study abroad, if they already know the english language , then it it " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is going to be very easy for them to take admission abroad. however, if a child start learning foreign language at secondary school , it it " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">is going to be tough for him or her because of their vast syllabus and competition in their academic . As a result, they do not pay full attention to language skill and may face failure to learning a language language " style="color: rgb(85, 85, 85); font-size: 14px; white-space: pre-wrap;">due their pacled schedule at secondary school.
In spite of this, there are also disadvantages to learning a language at primary school. Firstly, children are not enough mature to understand everything at school and may face problems while they learn new language. Consequently, they have less time to other activities which is helpful for their future such as dance, painting, games many more which is not only beneficial for their mental growth but also for their physical growth. Thus, it brings disadvantages along with advantages.
To conclude, no doubt there are some drawbacks of learning foreign language at primary school , however it is more beneficial for every child to lead a positive life in the future because knowing language is always helpful in career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, thus, while, no doubt, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46341463415 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.36737064968 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560975609756 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6619359554 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.0 106.682146367 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.5 7.06120827912 248% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25440563893 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152049270514 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112610818106 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202642678535 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502683594656 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.0946893788 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.98 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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