Some feel that governments should prioritize healthcare instead of other important areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? And give examples
While health care is important, there are other areas that need to be dealt with before healthcare is considered a priority. This essay will discuss the other important areas and why they need to be prioritised above healthcare.
One such area that needs to be considered a priority over healthcare is sanitation. The government needs to start cleaning garbage and rubbish off the streets, disposing of it responsibly and ensuring that materials that can be reused are recycled. They also need to sanitise public garbage bins and make sure that puddles are drained to prevent the breeding of mosquitoes as this can help reduce the spread of diseases such as dengue and malaria. Cleaning up the streets will undoubtedly reduce the spread of sickness and increase the quality of life for the citizens.
Another area that needs to be prioritised is corruption. Most of the politicians that are active today are corrupt and are more interested in lining their pockets with the taxpayers money rather than helping any of them. This has to change. If a group of honest politicians band together and decide to crack down on corruption, they will be able to weed out the greedy ones and keep only the honest and hardworking ones that actually have the best interests of their constituents at heart. This will result in many positive developments for the citizens as this group will work towards making their lives better.
In conclusion, these other areas require the immediate attention of the government and need to be dealt with swiftly after which the government can turn its focus to less important areas such as healthcare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'taxpayers'' or 'taxpayer's'?
Suggestion: taxpayers'; taxpayer's
...rested in lining their pockets with the taxpayers money rather than helping any of them. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, while, as to, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99632352941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65433792874 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7833023626 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.25 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103363165239 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441636419275 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525343168361 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860761659451 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606207574389 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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