There is an ongoing debate about whether the tactics that are adapted for making the commercials defy the ethics and morals of the society. Some agree with this opinion, whereas there are a few who believe the contrary. I firmly agree with the stand taken by the former group. My reasons for the same will be discussed in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, the foremost reason why I consider certain advertising strategies as unethical is keeping in mind the negative influences they have on the naive minds of the customers. Children and teenagers are most seriously affected by the commercials depicting the latest toys, clothing, and gadgets and pressurize their parents for buying them. Many time, people buy products that do not fit in their budget just because they are promoted by their favorite superstars or sportsmen which can lead them to a severe financial crisis.
My secondary reason to agree with the view given in the statement is that certain adverts promote food items which can prove to be injurious to the health of the individual consuming them. An appropriate example of this is the commercials of various tobacco products which are designed in a way to encourage people to consume them. With the advent of technology, online advertising via the mode of social media has also increased which can install various viruses in the devices on which they are played. They are also a source of constant irritation for the people as they pop-up every time a person is browsing the internet.
On the other hand, not all advertisements have a negative impact on society. They can also be used as a medium for spreading awareness in the society about various diseases and their cures. Another potential use of commercials could be to remove discrimination on the basis of race, gender, caste, religion and to promote equality and feelings of brotherhood among people. For instance, there are numerous adverts that discourage the practice of female infanticide and promote girl child education.
Thus, to draw a conclusion, it can be said that, utmost care must be taken by the directors while shooting advertisements. All the aspects of commercials which are immoral or unacceptable must be edited and more emphasis must be placed on highlighting the details which can enlighten the people of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...y the ethics and morals of the society. Some of the people agree with this opinion, whereas...
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Suggestion: Many times
...essurize their parents for buying them. Many time, people buy products that do not fit in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, second, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 389.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0411311054 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74071919202 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54498714653 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2138802512 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.352941176 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8823529412 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135223274022 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457933126484 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453280075642 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0746398274508 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355784435912 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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