There are both advantages and disadvantages to charging for admissions to museums. In my opinion, the benefits of admission fees in museums outweigh the downside for reasons stated below.
On one hand, charging a specific amount for access to museums will bring in some funds to maintain the museum. In museums, there are certain expenses like the salary of the employees sustaining the museum, the cost for maintaining and cleaning the artifacts and keeping the museum under a certain condition (air-conditioned) to keep the artifacts from getting damaged. A museum may not always have access to enough funds required to maintain the museum. So, to keep up with the costs of maintaining a museum, charging fees to admit people will be beneficial to the museum.
On the other hand, free of cost admission will bring in more visitors than charging a specific fee. The museums charging fees might be less popular among people. Nevertheless, the people who are fascinated by arts and history, will always visit museums, with or without fees. Because, they understand that their fee is going behind the maintenance of these arts. Since, an enthusiast who appreciates art and culture will always want to keep up with the newest additions of museums. So, they will happily agree visit museums even if they are charging admission fees.
To conclude, although charging admission fees might bring in less visitors than usual, but the advantages of using the admission fees to maintain the artifacts of the museum override the drawbacks of less visitors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ys visit museums, with or without fees. Because, they understand that their fee is goin...
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Line 4, column 62, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun visitors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... charging admission fees might bring in less visitors than usual, but the advantages...
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Line 4, column 201, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun visitors is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...of the museum override the drawbacks of less visitors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, thus, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1185770751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68364020117 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501976284585 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.0436908227 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38461538462 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282704492278 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123406588235 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832532714085 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208475736683 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0827818952647 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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