Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
More people have conflicting views about the appearance at work. Some companies firmly believe that their employees should dress smartly and formally, while other organizations think the work quality is more important. In my point of view, the workers’ appearance should depend on their type of work that is in service fields or production areas.
First of all the nice look will give employees more chances in their career if they are working in service or entertainment fields. In these jobs, the worker have to work with human such as customers or audiences. Therefore, their smartly dress will show their respect to the clients and impress the other people favorably. A fashion shop owner with a nice dress is an intelligent way to introduce her products and attract the shoppers is an example.
In contrast to service industry, production and technical areas are focus on the product manufacturing and most of working time is with the machine, hence, it is no need to take care of the appearance. These companies value the work effectiveness of the staffs above their dresses. The owners in these fields hold the perspective that comfortable clothes will help their employees work more effective. However, some industries require the workers wear the uniform or specialized clothes in the working area such as pharmaceutical facilities. In these factories, they control the environment strictly and the staffs must wear cleaned and sanitized uniform to make sure the products' quality.
In conclusion, smartly dressing has varying opinions in different industry. Employees need to wear attractive in service field, while they can wear comfortable clothes in others. I wholeheartedly believe that each worker should know what the suitable clothes for the job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, look, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32269503546 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85096900093 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549645390071 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0878263156 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.066666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200026792532 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737077283452 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493371147054 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126377693492 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370301989128 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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