Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, there has been a growing debate about whether employees of organisations should wear formally. This is put forward by the proponents that the formal dress and appearance play an important role in the workplace. The opponents, on the other hand, believe that the quality of work is the most crucial point at work although the appearance effects on business. this essay will illustrate both viewpoints surrounding this issue, before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some people who hold the view that workers should dress suitable for their job. These people present several arguments, but the most persuasive one is perhaps that the appearance of workers could impact on their business. In other words, some professionals can establish a sense of trust with clients by wearing a uniform. For example, doctors, nurses and chefs dress their uniforms to show their roles and hygiene condition to their customers. Another point often made by the proponents is formal dress could build a sense of pride to employees. This is because office workers can concentrate on their work with a sense of belonging. To illustrate, dealers who wear suit sell more products due to a beneficial imagination toward customers.
On the other hand, there are opponents of this view as well. one of the most convincing arguments is perhaps that a number of organisations today are unnecessary to greet clients, co-workers and owners. This is evidenced by the fact that there are many home-working services and teleworking services. For instance, people who work for telephone counselling don’t need to wear a formal suit. As well as this, companies should respect the workers’ individuality. this is because the dress code can offer workers to create their unique personality and it is one of their rights. For example, Steve jobs who create the ‘apple’ company always wore a turtleneck sweater to save time and he concentrated more on his work.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are both viewpoints in relation to the dress code at the workplace. To choose which side I am on, I believe that workers should have a right to choose their clothes due to reasons discussed above while some professionals such as practitioners, nurses and chef require to wear their uniform for maintaining hygiene.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1991.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89633101433 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 598.5 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0958218672 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.55 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236663707453 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692141382338 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468003910338 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148558174032 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265526927418 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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