Some parents go abroad for work, taking their families with them
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of keeping pets for individuals and for society?
It is the fact that those who take their children and spouses when they go oversea to work. I definitely believe that the disadvantages are eclipsed by the advantages.
As can be seen that going abroad with their families become drawbacks in term of secure and living conditions. With regard to the first idea, some spouses may take their children to a war-torn country, which means they are likely to put their sons and daughter in danger because of high crime rates such as Afghanistan. The second point that need to be consideration is that working oversea could be escalated standard of living for themselves related to public services such as commuting for far-away distance, schools being of poor quality.
In spite of the aforementioned arguments, there are more substantial benefits for people going abroad for work due to children’s development. More specially, when the children moving with their parents to new country, they have an opportunity to have insight about new culture and tradition. Which means that they are able to learn a new languages from new one, then it could be a head start over the others who just lived in only one country. Furthermore, they find themselves challenge to approach traditional values to cultivate knowledge as well as experience.
To sum up, although there are some disadvantages for family members if they go out of their nation for work when they get a lucrative jobs in foreign country. I would argue that the advantages are far greater.
- Drug abuse, is becoming increasingly common in the world today.What are some of the problems associated with drug abuse and what are some of the measures that can be taken to solve these problems? 56
- Some people think that women should be able to join the army, navy or air forces like what men do. Others think that only men should do thatTo what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that students at school and university can learn more from teachers and lessons than from TV and the internet.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Many people believe that the internet has made life much easier for most people. However, others fear that it might also represent a threatDiscuss both views and state your opinion 84
- Many people keep pets.Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of keeping pets for individuals and for society? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 344, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'language'?
Suggestion: language
...means that they are able to learn a new languages from new one, then it could be a head s...
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Line 9, column 494, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'approaching'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: approaching
...hermore, they find themselves challenge to approach traditional values to cultivate knowled...
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Line 13, column 135, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'job'?
Suggestion: job
...tion for work when they get a lucrative jobs in foreign country. I would argue that ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, second, so, then, well, such as, as well as, in spite of, to sum up, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.036 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81898989001 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0987454685 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.454545455 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1818181818 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316114102175 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113859683131 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095527356392 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20270327817 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687886794646 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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