Some peaple believe that playing an musical instrument can be benificial in many different ways. Other think it is a waste of time to play a musical instrument. Discuss both views and g8ve your own opinion
Musical instrument is created or adopted to create musical sound. The topic reveal that, Is playing instrument will benifical for us? Through this essay, I will shed light on both aspects of this topic with example and shape up my opinion at the end.
On one side , there are group of comminity who think that playing instrument is benifical in many ways. Broodly speaking there are two main reasons behind this. First and foremost reason behind this is relaxation moreover It is the best way to remove our stress and make our mind free from all adversities. Afterwards the person also show their hidden talent to everyone. In additon sometime peaple face some disasters in their life so playing instruments also help them to heel their inner wounds and give satsification to them. Secondaly, if person continuesly do practice of playing instrument one day he will perfrction in this stream hence became a prefessional musician in the future. By doing so we are able to connect with old tradition.
Controry to this, there is an opposing group of peaple who believe that it is the wastage of time. To make their argument convensing they claim that it act as over buden on students who doing their study as they donot do their study properly and always indulged in these activity. They think that there will be no carrer in this stream. And there 8s no proper dstination fo musicians.
Nevertheless, weighting both the options, i believe that there is not single conclusion. But i think that it varies from person to person if any having great intrest in it, that person will have to do it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 77, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'reveals'.
Suggestion: reveals
...pted to create musical sound. The topic reveal that, Is playing instrument will benifi...
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Line 3, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...p my opinion at the end. On one side , there are group of comminity who think ...
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Line 3, column 25, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'groups'?
Suggestion: groups
...at the end. On one side , there are group of comminity who think that playing ins...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this activity' or 'these activities'?
Suggestion: this activity; these activities
...r study properly and always indulged in these activity. They think that there will be no carre...
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Line 7, column 43, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...vertheless, weighting both the options, i believe that there is not single conclu...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hat there is not single conclusion. But i think that it varies from person to per...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80434782609 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52831841549 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.2170267043 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209129240993 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682893165472 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725029510258 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113131455346 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571368893843 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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