discuss the reasons and solution of terrorism
Terrorism is define as the unlawful use of violence and weapons, especially against civilians, for their own benifits. the topic reveals that what are causes behind the rise of terrorism ? in this essay, i will examine the possible reasons for this phenomenon and suggests some of protective measures that authorties could implement o reduce this problem.
The first step to understand why people give rise to such a problems. Broadly speaking there are on two main reasons behind it. the first and foremost reason for this is people do not get proper rights. for instance people mainly choose wrong path when they are diverted from their due to some issues. so to accomplish their dreams and goals they make their own rules and regulation and contribute all the people who are victim of issues.moreover, they make their own army so they will rule on others. apart from that illiteracy is one of the cause for this . peaple do not think weather it is beneficial or not. people make them convence by doing talk with them against nation. somehow they also give lots of greed to make them in their favour.
there is almost certainly no tone solution to this problem. give the complexity of its causes. however, one option to make public aware that do not participate in such a activities. organised a seminar through which make aware about the drawbacks and problems that occurs because of them. it would also be possible when police also take part of these seminars and make them more active towards these activities. give harsh punishment to the terrorist when they caught .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, apart from, broadly speaking, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88432835821 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48333177903 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589552238806 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4369966498 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7222222222 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8888888889 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0873494109264 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0298181327081 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435985348375 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651777506555 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447185537588 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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