Some people are reducing their walks, however many health experts say that walking is the
best exercise to maintain health. Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distances?
It goes without saying that health is wealth. Undoubtedly, no person can buy health no matter how wealthy or rich he might be. Nowadays, the interest of people towards walking is diminishing day by day. In the below essay, I would try to enunciate, some of the main reasons of this fact and provide some essential solutions to encourage the people.
To begin with, there are multifarious reasons behind less walking. Firstly, in this challenging era everyone is so busy that nobody wants to waste a single moment. Therefore, to cover the distance of their travel they use transportation to save the...
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due to scare of land and space in most of the undeveloped and incipient countries do not have enough footpaths for pedestrian.
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are also the main cause
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if regimes come forward and take certain measures
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'On the other hand' means However. It doesn't mean 'On another hand'. You can use 'in addition'
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