A daily walk of thirty minutes is said to be the best exercise. Our grandparents used to walk for miles on end to reach their destination. Today, people walk much less. Many factors are responsible for this.
In the developed world mist families have cars. They don't walk even to the nearest grocery store. In the developing world, too, people are giving up the habit of walking because they have easy access to public transport systems. We all seek comfort. Walking on foot can be tiring. Needless to say, people prefer to trevel by buses or cars whenever they have access to them. Motor vehicles are fast and thus they also help save time.
Unfortunately, this habit of using the car or bua has several negative. Consequences, most of us now spend hours in the office sitting in front of computers. Because of sandentery life style, we have developed many health problems like obesity, diabetes and heart trouble. We can avoid of these lifestyle diseases by simply walking for 30 minutes a day.
Many people who given up the habit of walking are unaware of the health problems they face. The government and healt workers need to create awareness among the genreal public about benefits of walking. People who use cars should park their vehicles farther from their office and take steps instead of elevator. Children too should be encouraged to walk to school. Once they get used to this habit they are wore likely to stick to it in the future.
To recapitulate, lacl of time and need for comfort are the reasons that prevent people from walking. However most of us will start walking again if we are aware of its benefits. The government and media can play important role in this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ped world mist families have cars. They dont walk even to the nearest grocery store....
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uters. Because of sandentery life style, we have developed many health problems l...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a given'.
Suggestion: who is a given
...g for 30 minutes a day. Many people who given up the habit of walking are unaware of ...
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Line 7, column 365, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...should be encouraged to walk to school. Once they get used to this habit they are wo...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worn'.
Suggestion: worn
...ce they get used to this habit they are wore likely to stick to it in the future. ...
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Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...asons that prevent people from walking. However most of us will start walking again if ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76530612245 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4021144102 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58843537415 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.9879709098 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.9130434783 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.7826086957 20.7667163134 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.17391304348 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282264933473 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811499628946 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845246358623 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161840742774 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061285222753 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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