Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the great success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
From the first ancient Olympic Games held in Greece (776 B.C.) till today, people have shown tremendous enthusiasm and obsession with Sports. From athletics, ball games to aquatic, gymnastics games, sports have been developed into various forms and suits for vast kinds of interests. The requirements to win a game may vary, but a strong body and mental attitude are most commonly known factors for athletes to succeed. This article is aiming to learn the two factors and discuss which one is more favorable to achieve great success in sports.
The strongest and fittest athletes would have better chance to win a competition. As a sport such as swimming and racing usually involves large amount of physical output, it requires the winner to have better body strength than others to get the golden medal. In case of the team winning, for instance a tug-of-war, the team with stronger athletes would have more chance to win as well. However, a group of the fittest athletes may not be able to win if they do not know how to cooperate.
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- Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the great success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 100
- Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals and teams can achieve the great success in sports. But other people think the success is much related to the mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, thus, well, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 3.0 24.0651302605 12% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 1615.20841683 53% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84269662921 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45557035728 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7087883477 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.75 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119827550246 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516335165351 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480912726118 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883483137173 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0264864729966 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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