Some people argue that the fittest and strongest individuals can achieve the greatest success in sports. But other people think that success is much related to mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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some people believe that fitness or stronge...
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some people believe that fitness or strongest it more important than mental ...
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...ental attitude the other think driffrent . first about physically it is thought v...
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... thought very important things like gym , street workout both make us increse the...
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...orkout both make us increse the strength , yoga help in increse body mobility i...
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...the strength , yoga help in increse body mobility in so many sports especially ...
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...th , yoga help in increse body mobility in so many sports especially like foot b...
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...so many sports especially like foot ball , baseball , boxing which sport included ...
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...rts especially like foot ball , baseball , boxing which sport included so many pow...
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...seball , boxing which sport included so many power , Cristiano Ronaldo who is my long ido...
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...oxing which sport included so many power , Cristiano Ronaldo who is my long idoli...
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...cluded so many power , Cristiano Ronaldo who is my long idolize in the sport i lo...
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...do who is my long idolize in the sport i love most football , he is the best pla...
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...dolize in the sport i love most football , he is the best player in the world now ...
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... is the best player in the world now and he need to training every single day to ...
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...every single day to increse his strength , speed to keep his performance to be the...
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...rmance to be the top player in the world , and the otherwise people think that men...
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... attitude is more important than fittest , we can not not accept the important of ...
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...is more important than fittest , we can not not accept the important of mental attitude...
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...de will help we concentrate in the match , play good with the teamate . In conclus...
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...n the match , play good with the teamate . In conclusion i think strength is more ...
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...y good with the teamate . In conclusion i think strength is more important than t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, i think, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 41.998997996 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 737.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81699346405 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49006105154 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62091503268 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 506.74238477 44% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 296.021395623 49.4020404114 599% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 245.666666667 106.682146367 230% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.0 20.7667163134 246% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128062692408 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123253403969 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724533258071 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128062692408 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.8 13.0946893788 205% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 28.17 50.2224549098 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 78.4519038076 28% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 10.7795591182 250% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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