It is argued that getting married before finishing school or getting a job is not a good choice. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
in my opinion getting married before you finishing your school or getting a job is not a good choice , because if you had married before you finishing your education first in that age you are to young to stable your life , Marriage comes with huge responsibilities, you can't take care of yourself but also care for your wife and your children , this is very hard to adapt for your family and its make you stressful for them . Second if you can not find 1 stable job , now the word have an high cost of living so you must to trying trying not stop to make enough money for your family and if your own finance its not enough capable for your family , so your family need to deal with a abily live in a miserable life . so i think you need to graduate or find a stable job and then you can do what you want to do
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 5.60731707317 517% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 645.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.08227848101 4.92477711251 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16813893611 2.65546596893 82% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563291139241 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 283.868780488 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 22.4926829268 231% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.807244772 43.030603864 318% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 215.0 112.824112599 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 52.6666666667 22.9334400587 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.6666666667 5.23603664747 395% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239131022141 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174036528738 0.103423049105 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0940055552414 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239131022141 0.15604864568 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.2329268293 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.08 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.0 10.3012195122 194% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.27 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 14.0 40.7170731707 34% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 11.4329268293 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.9970731707 207% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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